"For a second I couldn't say anything. I couldn't see how she could be there and some part of my brain would not accept it. I shook my head and tried to think something to say and when it is finally came out all I could find was, "Hello. Would you like some spaghetti and meatballs?"
I found that this paragraph strikes me because I saw the same situation and feeling in a novel written by Gary Paulsen which named "Hatchet" before. I was surpised when I saw this paragraph because it reminds me about how the main character, Brian, survived in the nourthern wood in "Hatchet" and how Brian reacts when he saw someone walking down from a plane and talked to him. I have two thought when I read this paragraph. One of it is the author is lucky because he got help finally and another is the author is funny because his react was a bit clumsy.
2 comments:
At the beginning of this sentence I dont understand what you mean?
One of it is the author is lucky because he got help finally and another is the author is funny because his react was a bit clumsy.
Does the last clause of the second sentence has an error? Is it right to start writing in past, continue in the past, and then change to present?
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